Oh man..
It's awesome, I laughed so hard at Sean Connery impersonation because I didn't expect any of this, but It's a shame the song is repetitive as hell.
Hint hint ;)
Oh man..
It's awesome, I laughed so hard at Sean Connery impersonation because I didn't expect any of this, but It's a shame the song is repetitive as hell.
Hint hint ;)
hehe thank you.... hint hint
Ouch, my ears
It's hard, extremly hard to listen to this song.
The tune and the melody is very nice, but every synth used ruins somehow the song.
Maybe if the 8bit sounds alike volume was reduce, it'll be much more nicer, but in this case here, I disagree with every synth used, it's headaching.
It's ok.
Sounds a lot like Clubbed to death from Rob Dougan.
Overall, it's ok, it's a shame that there isn't any vocal or voice sample, some "Yeah!" or something like that shall suits perfectly the song.
Lots of flaws
It's hard to listen to this song, the guitar seems out of tune at sometime.
The distorsion used for the guitar is a bit irritating.
There's too many stuff in the same time so it's hard to focus on one instrument and the melody is unpleasant.
You should focus more on the melody part and less on the "I want to put a lots of shit together and see what it gets", just be simple and keep one nice tune.
Overall, I like the 2:09 part, everything suddenly sounds "ok" for me even if it's a melting pot of "lots of stuff".
Thank you for the constuctive criticism. I undrestand what youre saying, and I somewhat agree. Thx again.
Fix your mic
The rythm and the tune are simple, it's ok for a rap song.
Your lyrics are nice, the words are all related to horror in general, so it's a good job.
But the mic ruins everything. We can hear you spitting into the mic, it's unpleasant.
Also, you should try to use 2 or 3 more voices during the verse in order to get a nice stereo effect by singing twice the same lyrics.
yea im just starting out. lol. got wait for more money. to record better.. but thanks. im alwasy looking for help
Common space shooter song
Repetitive, the tune used are a little irritating, I can't sense any feeling going out from this song, only a feeling of something moving really fast, know what I mean?
Overall, your song could easily be use into a space shooter game for the Flash portal for NG,
I can perfectly imagine some nice space level with some spaceship shooting at things while listening to this song.
But musicaly speaking, it's not that good.
I know what you mean, I only whish I had my original project so that I could change things around.
Man, the bass
The whole concept is funny, the Mario!!! sample are cool and your song is ok.
But damn, the bass, too loud man, too much distorsion, It's just unlistenable and ears-bleeding.
Ha, I'm glad you found it funny. I'm also really glad you said that about the bass. I like to hear what you have to say. I'm still experimenting with trying to get a powerful bass and cut down on distortion, but as you can see, I still need work. Thanks a lot for your review, and perhaps I will try to fix the distortion and re upload it. Thanks again, and God bless!
~IceMasterDlux ><>
Too many synth effect at the same time
You found some interesting tune but some of the synth used don't suits the whole song, I'm talking about 0:28, the trumpet phaser thingy is a little bit irritating.
I'm looking forward for you if you work more on this song.
The drum bass thingy ruins it
At 0:20 and so on, this bass boom boom thingy totally fucks up the ambiance you try to make.
At 1:17, the songs is getting really interesting, this is a nice use of a synth tune for a techno song.
I suggest you to proceed into that 'synth tune' way for the next next time you'll work on this song, add some variation and you shall get some nice techno tune.
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